Anasazi - Emma Michaels

I believe the author of this book is young, and this is her second book. My advice to her would be to get a really good, really honest editor to smooth out the writing, as it's full of errors and poorly worded sentences. I think the author has decent ideas, and it's great that she is writing novels and getting them published, but it's obvious that she hasn't done much reading of good writing, and taking her writing to the next level will make her books even more popular.